Narrative Essay On An Amusement Park

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When you stroll into an amusement park you should notice crowds of people and long lines. You should hear screaming, all the rides and pitchers pitching sales, right? Not in my case. The sun had just risen as we pulled into the empty parking lot with only the sight of the band members unloading from the yellow school bus. It was a very crisp morning so we waited in the warm car until they let us in. We finally were allowed to walk in and listen to eighth grade band perform their melodies. As we waited for the rides to officially open, Kylie told me it was going to be entertaining and enjoyable. When they finally let us in and I looked upon what would either be ridiculously exciting or terrifying, I knew the day was going to be one interesting …show more content…
“Hey what are you doing here?” I heard Kylie say. I turned around and saw her sister and her friends from the band. “Do you hear that?” I said as I tapped Kylie. The room we were in looked like an old shack with brown rope lining where the line was supposed to be. Soon Kylie could hear the noise too. “Yea I do!” she exclaimed. There were big barn doors blocking the ride from us. A line started and we knew that there was a ride in progress. We waited and waited and waited until finally they came out. We walked in and I was so intrigued! It was a big UFO shaped ride. There were lights on the ceiling that flashed white when the ride went. We found an empty spot. I was on the inside of the seat, Kylie on the outside near the little door. Her sister across from me and their dad across from Kylie. Then we started spinning and boom! The lights went out and that’s when the action started! We spun faster, faster, faster! The beeping became louder, louder, louder! Then the wind started. It blew our braids back and forth. The white lights flashed! We went sideways and I almost smashed Kylie to death. I tried to fight gravity, but I lost. When it was over we were crying from laughing and screaming so hard! “Well what next girls?” asked Kylie’s dad. “Ooo! Let’s go to the Prowler!” Kylie responded. “Yea! To the Prowler!” I replied. With that we were …show more content…
I raced ahead of Mr. Overbaugh and found Kylie in front of the disappointing sign. The prowler was closed due to high winds that windy day. We had walked to the whole other side of the park to see a closed sign! With that we decided it was time for lunch. We walked to the food court and feasted our eyes upon endless choices of delicious food! Kylie and I ended up getting fresh hot pizza. Her dad bought himself nice cold Subway. We had to wait forever and ever for that good meal. We were eating and her dad went to throw our stuff away when all of a sudden these weird boys came up to talk to us. We were ready to throw our drinks at them but they started to walk away when Kylie’s dad came back. We had a good laugh but he didn’t understand. We were almost done and I had given into my craving and went to get dippin dots. Kylie caved too so we went up together. There was a new lady at the stand and she did not know how to work the cash register so we waited for about twenty minutes until she finally came back and said she was ready to take our order. We both got cookie dough and it was perfect! The nice cool dots under the shady umbrella with Dr. Pepper to keep the heat away. Soon it was time for more

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