What do blood, excitement, and frustration have in common? Fishing is always fun but when you don't catch anything, it can be frustrating. If I could, I would go fishing every day On the Fourth of July I was a nice warm day. I got out of bed, but everyone else was asleep. (Compound) I got breakfast. I was so hungry, I could eat a horse. (Metaphor) Every else woke up after I ate breakfast. When everyone was ready for the parade, we left. After the parade, my dad and I went home to get fishing supplies for the fishing derby. I told him that this was my year. I lost to someone last year who caught a Northern Pike. I told him that I was hoping that I could catch a Northern Pike. I had the it's-the-first-day-of-christmas feeling. (Hyphenated Modifier) I love
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When we got to the lake, I had to go under the pavilion so I could get a number. I told them my age, and I waited for everyone to do the same. (Compound) When every was done telling the people their names and ages, the announcer said to start fishing. Me and my dad went to the other end of the lake, so I was expecting to catch something right away. (Compound) Finally I told my dad that we need a new spot, so we went down the hill of the waterfall, where they made that new bridge. (Compound) I went to one side of the bridge and I saw this big fish. It was as skinny as a twig. (Simile) I knew what it was right away. “I could tell him, I thought, or I could not tell him”. (Compound) I yelled to my dad, “Pike, Pike, Pike”. I told him because I wanted him to help. (Complex) My dad said, “No way”. I showed him the monster fish swimming in the creek because I wanted him to believe that I was telling the truth. (Complex) “I want to catch him”, I told him. “Well go get
When we got to the lake, I had to go under the pavilion so I could get a number. I told them my age, and I waited for everyone to do the same. (Compound) When every was done telling the people their names and ages, the announcer said to start fishing. Me and my dad went to the other end of the lake, so I was expecting to catch something right away. (Compound) Finally I told my dad that we need a new spot, so we went down the hill of the waterfall, where they made that new bridge. (Compound) I went to one side of the bridge and I saw this big fish. It was as skinny as a twig. (Simile) I knew what it was right away. “I could tell him, I thought, or I could not tell him”. (Compound) I yelled to my dad, “Pike, Pike, Pike”. I told him because I wanted him to help. (Complex) My dad said, “No way”. I showed him the monster fish swimming in the creek because I wanted him to believe that I was telling the truth. (Complex) “I want to catch him”, I told him. “Well go get