Jimmy Raigal: A Short Story

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On a hot summer day in a small town called Yellowseed. 16-year-old Jimmy raigal.In a house on 56th street lived a 16 year old boy. His name was Jimmy raigal and who lived his ten year old brother and His Mom and Dad. They lived in that small house of 13 years. It was June 14, 2035. It was the first year college for Jimmy; he was terrified of bullies every time he saw one he closed his eyes and walked away slowly. His palms were always sweaty, and he started to look down when in the presence of bullies. The problem was that Jimmy had a major anger issue. On his first day of school, while walking to his first period class and another college student tripped Jimmy. Jimmy fell slowly and in the air ie wondered what happened. As he hit the hard …show more content…
Jimmy woke up very tired and walked down the small stairs with his hand shaking hoping for some good news. As he walked to the table knowing that he would have to go to military school, Jimmy ate his pancakes like this was the last time he would have breakfast.
“Well ready to go, honey,” mom said
“ Yes, I’m willing to go see the school mom,” said Jimmy
“ Okay go get in the car” stated mom
As they took a two-hour drive to the closest military school, Jimmy sat there staring at the trees and looked at kids at the window not knowing what to think of military school. He sat there still, cold, and scared. His palms were sweaty and didn’t have any idea of what to suspect.
As they reached the front office of S.T.R.I.C.T, which was a military school near his house. If you did badly in this school, they would send you to the Army and fight for their country. As they entered the saw big blue pictures and also many gold awards and many trophies. As he came into the principal's room, he saw a big man standing in front of him with a big mustache and a bushy beard.
“Hello, New student” Principal Dinglehoffer stated
“ Hi,” Jimmy said quietly and very softly.
“ What is your name.” said
“ My name is Jimmy” he stated
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When he reached his house, he went to sleep not knowing what he has seen. The Next day he woke up and when he got out of his room and saw his calendar and started crying because it was his last day of summer. As he was walking down stairs, a strong blueberry smell came from the kitchen. As he walked down stairs, he was greeted by everyone in his family His mom, dad, brother, and even his grandparents.Everyone came to say bye to him because they will only see them in 2 months. As the day ended with a farewell party, Jimmy started to cry knowing to enjoy this moment because they would never happen again. As Jimmy woke up the next day, he packed all his bags and left the house at 6:00 A.M. knowing that school started at 8:30 A.M. As he was exacting the house his brother and both his parents gave him a big

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