Narrative Essay About A Fallen Angel

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Darkness befell upon the sky as I was getting closer to my destination. I was meeting up with my girlfriend for a date, our first since we became a couple. When I arrived, there she was standing so elegantly as the gust of night gently blew her hair in way so mystically. If I didn’t know who she was, I might have mistaken her for an angel. However, I knew all too well that she could not possibly be an angel. Much rather, she was a fallen angel. One born of a disturbed heart in which god would not acknowledge. In fact, no one did, not until I met her at least. When I first laid my eyes on her I, without a moment of hesitation, talked to her despite me doing so was not very much like me at all. Before I knew it, I was completely shut off; …show more content…
“Ummm Wh-” she quickly cut me off, “It’s a surprise.” When I put it on, She grabbed my hand and my heart instantly started to beat faster than I could count. I had no Idea what was coming and couldn’t stop imagining every possible outcome for what I would see when the blindfold would come off. Perhaps a pile of dead bodies? No no no, I can’t think like that, there’s no way she’s that type of person… I hope… A few moments later, we arrived at our actual destination. i knew this because we had stopped walking. “Lie down.” she said. I said nothing and slowly dropped to my knees to fall back. I heard a bit of rustling in grass and then, all of a sudden, my eyes were lit with the most beautiful scene I had seen my whole life. A starry night sky so magical I felt like I had fallen into a different world. I looked to the side and saw her smiling. “I would often come here when i feel like I just had to get away from everything.” she said. She then gazed into my eyes, “Do you have special place to escape the world? I wouldn’t mind sharing this place with you.” “There’s no need…” I said “I already have one.” She looked at me with a little disappointment in her. “Really? where?” she

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