She was decided on her career since she was a little girl and a few tough courses wasn’t going to turn her away. She went on to get her doctorate of physical therapy and is so proud to have the highest degree in her family.”
I included this detail to show that her intelligence is important to her, while also as a segue into talking about her wealth from her physical therapy salary. Altogether, I had a lot of fun writing Writing Project One and designing my collage because it allowed me to be creative and wasn’t just the average research paper that we have to write too many of by the time we finish high school and college, not even to mention graduate …show more content…
Even though the Deep Revision was similar to one of the research papers, I did like writing it because I liked the topic I picked for the Deep Revision which was legalization of physician assisted suicide. Rereading my Deep Revision, a part that pleased me the most is my introduction. I liked to be able to start with a case study, I think it is very interesting and it grabs the reader’s attention. In the introduction I was also able to demonstrate my ability to write a map and thesis. I had some problems with Writing Project Two because my map wasn’t developed enough, so in the Deep Revision I made it very clear where I was taking this paper, that way the reader was not confused while reading my writing. As I have mentioned earlier, a part of my writing that pleased me the most was my introduction on the case study involving Jack Kervorkian taking the lives of many through physician assisted suicide illegally. He was known as a murderer and spent eight years in prison. Later in my writing I brought him up again which I believe was one example of effective writing. After arguing that doctors shouldn’t be made to be criminals for doing what is in the best interest of their patients I said, “For example, as I previously mentioned, Jack Kervorkian was known as “Doctor Death”, but did he