If I were to go back and revise my paper I would try to add to my analysis in the third and fourth paragraphs. I would also consider doing some reorganization within those two paragraphs. I would also take more time to go back and look at my punctuation. I would also seek out someone to read over my essay and give me feedback or suggestions for corrects I might have missed.
When I revise my writing I dedicate most of my time to looking at sentence structure and seeing if it makes sense. This includes taking complex sentences and breaking them down into shorter, simpler sentences. Once I decide where do divide a sentence I try to rework it. I may reorganize sentences or replace words to make my langue appropriate for formal writing. The second
When I revise my writing I dedicate most of my time to looking at sentence structure and seeing if it makes sense. This includes taking complex sentences and breaking them down into shorter, simpler sentences. Once I decide where do divide a sentence I try to rework it. I may reorganize sentences or replace words to make my langue appropriate for formal writing. The second