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While, I am overly critical of all my writing, I felt this paper was never fully developed. My core message was long in the finer details of the overall writing. So I refined and reorganized this essay to produce what I hope is a clear, and concise critique of commercialism and branding.
I feel my portfolio reveals some of my personal political views and how those views affect my interpretations on some of the course 's assigned readings. I believe we live in a very frightening time, and it seems a lot of people are unsure about what tomorrow might hold, regardless of their ideological or political beliefs. Although I my find a more personal political viewpoint to discuss within the writings, I hope that my writing shows my ability to see the positive and negative sides of the given topics, and provide an impartial, and critical