In order to become a stronger writer one must recognize his errors. In my previous essays I have not done a good job of expressing my subtopics. I have made the mistake of hiding my subtopics, making them unclear. In order to fix this problem I could create a web or some sort of visual that will allow me to organize my thoughts. Having a specific sentence in the beginning of each paragraph will also orientate the reader on what to look for in that specific paragraph. In the past I had the habit of bouncing around with my ideas, making my idea unclear. In order to strengthen my writing some other possibilities could be; to use different styles of writing to notify the reader when the subject has changed.
