My Writing Assignment

The essay I was assigned to write was an illustrated essay. I never heard of an illustrated essay before but I kind of had an idea of what it was about. After reading the two reading examples that were provided in essay number one. I got an idea of what I’m supposed to do. I spent hours trying to come up with what should I write about? At first I considered writing about how traveling educated me. I couldn’t come up with good examples. I started brain storming until I came up with a couple more topics to write about. My examples were very deep that I forgot to give the reader transitions. I think I’ve learned the most important thing about this writing assignment which was sensory details and multiple of examples. Although I had good examples my transitioning from an example to another wasn’t there. The readers were stuck in one example and I switched to another without providing the transition. I waited until the morning before class to do the editing on my paper. I think if I would’ve spent more time editing my paper it could have been better. …show more content…
My sensory details were really descriptive. The visuals that were provided throughout the essay were different. The feedback I received from the readers were “I could see where you were” and “I can picture that”. Those comments I received showed me that I’ve done great in painting pictures in my readers head. I’ve engaged my readers and got their full attention. I’ve managed to use descriptive details in all of my examples. Also, all of my examples were related to thesis statement. It took me a long time to come up with a good thesis that was connected to all of my