Upon my decision to undergo this course I was under the impression my writing ability and understanding of language was pretty solid. I have completed school and many other certificates and diplomas at a level of compatible literacy skills. In my current profession as a Personal Trainer I am direct and have strong style of communication verbally and thought this would relay into my writing.
However, after completing task one and submitting my writing to the various websites I found it surprising. Feedback was I use too much passive voice, my use of verbs and nouns “flabby” and I use pronouns without attention. These websites also flagged me for abstract wording. The overall reports have commented that, I need to be more direct and pay attention
However, after completing task one and submitting my writing to the various websites I found it surprising. Feedback was I use too much passive voice, my use of verbs and nouns “flabby” and I use pronouns without attention. These websites also flagged me for abstract wording. The overall reports have commented that, I need to be more direct and pay attention