My Weaknesss And My Strengths

Just as all people, places, and things, I have my strengths and my weaknesses. Strength is essential for a writer, for without it, they cannot spread their message well to the reader. I believe one of my strengths is including strong grammar and format within my work. For example, in my collaborative essay, I do an exceptional job with placing in-text citations throughout my part of the essay to provide support and explanation for my statements. I also believe I organize and flow from support to support, idea to idea, all throughout my work. In my essay, “The Concept of The Superhero: A Model for All”, I transition from phrase to phrase cleanly for the reader to truly get the content. In this essay, explain how important superheroes are to our society and to how we function as a human body. I transition from the topic of human needs and superheroes, to aspirations and superheroes, to hope found throughout superheroes, leaving the reader in a renewed perspective about what a superhero may mean to them. As in all my essays I have written, I leave the reader with a concluding paragraph reiterating the message I want them to hear in the most eloquent way I can. I believe it is important to have heart in what one is writing about and to have a purpose and …show more content…
I have shown weakness throughout my writing just as much as my strengths. I tend to not give specific detail within my writing; instead, I tend to generalize while still getting the message across to the reader. I also am aware that I under specify and reiterate too much. Especially in my essay “Making Music Education Mainstream”, I integrated sources instead of using evidence to support. Though it is good to integrate, in some cases, support from outside sources are necessary. I plan to further my learning in writing to learn how to be a better and more influential