When writing this paper I had a really hard time making my thesis statement because there was so many things that I wanted to write about and just choosing 3 topics to write about. I made the decision to write about Racial issues, Social change, and dealing with protest. Because you are really able to see the themes in today's word. It was really easy to compare event from then to now.
During this project I read a lot of articles and it was really hard to find a good sources, Because finding one that I could actually use that had the right information and wasn't to biased. In the end I only used 3 source because they had the most information on it and it really helped prove my points in my essay. To prove my research style im going to try …show more content…
I feel like I was really honest with my notes to her, but mostly it was positive feedback because she did such a good job. I did tell her that to have a better conclusion that she might want to add more about how we can as community solve some of the problems she brought up.
Yes, the he person that read my paper actually gave me some really good advice on how I should word some of my evidence and explanations so that everything goes together. I was really able to make my paper much better. I also had some grammar that I need to fix and he was able to point though mistakes out to me and I think that it really helped my paper.
I would give myself Of three on my hooks/intro because my hug was compelling and it directly supported my thesis but I don’t think that it was highly developed. I would give myself a four on this statement because my teeth and highly developed in my position was clear and you could clearly see the connection between historical events in the present for sores and citation I would give myself I would give myself a 3.5 because I had three sources but I didn’t cite one source correctly but my source in my thesis position went together. I would give myself a three on my conclusion because my conclusion properly summarized my main points and I didn’t have any new evidence and my last
During this project I read a lot of articles and it was really hard to find a good sources, Because finding one that I could actually use that had the right information and wasn't to biased. In the end I only used 3 source because they had the most information on it and it really helped prove my points in my essay. To prove my research style im going to try …show more content…
I feel like I was really honest with my notes to her, but mostly it was positive feedback because she did such a good job. I did tell her that to have a better conclusion that she might want to add more about how we can as community solve some of the problems she brought up.
Yes, the he person that read my paper actually gave me some really good advice on how I should word some of my evidence and explanations so that everything goes together. I was really able to make my paper much better. I also had some grammar that I need to fix and he was able to point though mistakes out to me and I think that it really helped my paper.
I would give myself Of three on my hooks/intro because my hug was compelling and it directly supported my thesis but I don’t think that it was highly developed. I would give myself a four on this statement because my teeth and highly developed in my position was clear and you could clearly see the connection between historical events in the present for sores and citation I would give myself I would give myself a 3.5 because I had three sources but I didn’t cite one source correctly but my source in my thesis position went together. I would give myself a three on my conclusion because my conclusion properly summarized my main points and I didn’t have any new evidence and my last