One of the strengths in my movie assignment is giving the reader clear picture of the story without giving too much information. In my assignment one of the clear proofs given is “ ever since her father died, her stepmother has treated her like a raggedy servant girl.” In this proof I have given a clear understanding of how Cinderella’s stepmother has treated Cinderella without giving too much information. It is important to be clear when writing but not to have too much information because you do not want the reader to lose interest in what the story is about. Another one of my strengths in my movie assignment is having a good structure. In my assignment everything is in order and no structural parts are missing. I even added a
