The reason I chose my Rhetorical Visual Analysis to revise is because it was one of my lowest graded papers. I made a few crucial mistakes resulting in a lower grade. While typing this paper, I was not effective incorporating in text citations. Then after I typed the documented analysis, I knew what I had to do. Three places in my paper I added in text citations or changed the wording, since they were not in my words. “Chick magnet” you thought I used that from a source, but we talked about it and I thought of it in my head. I thought of it by thinking about advertisements about Old Spice and Axe they refer them as “getting the chicks to come to you” or “chick magnet.” Then there were a few grammatical errors I fixed up, so they make sense.
