My Rhetorical Analysis Essay

There were also multiple revisions needed for my rhetorical analysis. Similar to my playlist profile, I had issues with grammar and proper MLA format, so I focused in on those micro revisions. However, I dealt with some more major problems within my paper as well. You commented that in my introduction I did not have a forecasting statement, so that was added to the paper. For the section that was titled tone, style, and emotional appeal, you made the comment that I did not discuss the actual emotional appeal or tone enough, and merely explained the purpose of the article. To improve this paragraph, I discussed what the emotional appeal of the paper was, what tone was set, and how that tied in to the style, in greater detail than the previous paragraphs. You also mentioned that throughout my document I did not introduce my sources or information, so that was a main target in my revisions. For example, on my claims and evidence I introduced the article where a man discussed his changing opinion of hip hop music that I did not previously. Then, later on in the paper when discussing the content, I introduced the study that was performed by a group of researchers that was cited in the paragraph. My logical fallacies were also brought up, and it was stated that I needed more examples, …show more content…
However, when writing the different genres throughout this course I realized how important the tone and the level of style the writing is to the paper. I learned that for something like the playlist profile I do not have to focus on terms and more formal language, unlike something that of the rhetorical analysis. Initially I did not mention that I had any problems or issues with grammar, however after writing multiple papers for this course I realized I do have issues with that and it is something I am continually working on as a