My Macbeth essay, was a complete failure, mainly because of my careless mistakes scattered throughout the paper. The grade I received was a reflection of of my failure to follow certain techniques and guidelines. Overall, my poor grade can be blamed on my lackluster thesis, and lack of quotations and analysis to support it. The first mistake I made in my essay was providing a weak thesis; in my thesis, I stated that, “The witches’ influence, along with how Macbeth handled situations using his free will puts them both at fault for how certain events occurred in Macbeth's life.” I feel like claiming that the events that occurred throughout the play being both the witches fault, as well as Macbeth’s was a poor choice because I found
