PaperRater (http://www.paperrater.com/) suggests I use a thesaurus to reduce the over use of simple words and that I should consult a website such as Vocabulary builder to improve my vocabulary – I will get ten random words from vocabulary builder each day of study; Polish my writing (http://www.polishmywriting.com/) says I should be careful with nominalisation; Writer’s Diet (Sword, n.d.) is saying that my writing is at ‘heart attack’ level with the excessive use of verbs and nouns. Knowing where I am going wrong is the first step in fixing my problems.
Writing literacy, in my opinion is one of the most important things school students need to learn. Even though I understand the above mentioned websites are just a guide, consulting them with my writing will help highlight areas that need attention. In saying that, the most valuable tool I plan on using is the feed back I get from my tutors. To me, there is no substitute for the real