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I was at Mexico i was at my house with my mom ,Pedro , and Rafa. So i asked my brother Pedro if i could borrow the keys off the car because i think i left my toy inside of the car. Then he gave me the keys and i went outside and walked to the car i opened the doors and started finding my toy that i left inside.

When i was finished trying and trying to find me toy i gave up and i locked the doors. Suddenly when i locked the doors of the car i left the keys inside of the car without knowing. So then i walked inside the house and my brother pedro asked me where are the keys he said i said that i left them outside.

So then he said ok if they are outside then go get them after i get out off the bathroom he said.Then i went outside after i waited for my brother pedro to go inside of the bathroom so then i saw him go inside of the bathroom i walked inside of the house and walked up stairs and went inside my dad’s room and i locked the door of the room and i waited for my brother to get out off the bathroom. Suddenly he yelled my name Jesus what i said where are the keys
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Your freaking stupid my brother Pedro said to me. Where are you Jesus he said.

i'm up stairs i said.

So then i locked the doors but i already did so i waited for my brother to come up stairs. Suddenly my brother scared me because he knocked on the door without i knowing. So my brother said open the door!!No!!Why?because you are going to hit.

Ok if you think i'm going to hit then why am i going to hit you my brother said. Because i left the keys inside of the car. Exactly but still i’m not going to open the door.

Ok if you don’t want to open the door i will bern down your bebe gun.

After i heard him go down stairs i quietly unlocked the door ran down looked around if he was trying to trick me but then I started thinking wait he does not know where is my Bebe gun

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