Introduction:
“There is no elevator to success, you have to take the stairs.” This quote has always affected my decisions.
Thesis:
Every since I was a little kid, school has always been a big part of my life and I have always had big dreams.
Main Point 1:
My childhood was anything but boring, whether I was sliding down the stairs on a trash can lid or making my own pool in my backyard I always found a way to entertain myself. Supporting Detail:
I was born at Reedley Hospital on November 22, 2003. I haved lived in the same house my whole life with my mom Alicia, dad Eddie, and sister Makayla. I have another sister named Serena but she lives in Visalia. Supporting Detail:
When I was a child I wanted to be an archaeologist, because I thought that I would be able to play with the dinosaurs, but when I realized that they are all dead I decided …show more content…
Supporting Detail:
One of my biggest future goals that has stayed consistent ever since about 5th grade was wanting to be a district attorney. I want to be a district attorney because I believe the people who commit crimes should be punished for their actions. This has always been a goal of mine because I have been really interested in lawyers ever since I watched the series of “Law and Order.” Supporting Detail:
A goal I have today is to get a 4.0 or more gpa. This is important to me because both of my sisters have done something special. My sister Makayla was Miss Dinuba and that is what she is known for. So instead of being Marcus a lot of people know me as Makayla’s brother. This is something I want to change. Also my sister Serena she has done a lot in the city of Visalia. She is the president for an organization called “Autism Links.” She is also a Behavior Analyst for Visalia Unified School District. So as you can see both of my sisters have accomplished great things now it’s my turn to do something to show my individuality. Supporting
“There is no elevator to success, you have to take the stairs.” This quote has always affected my decisions.
Thesis:
Every since I was a little kid, school has always been a big part of my life and I have always had big dreams.
Main Point 1:
My childhood was anything but boring, whether I was sliding down the stairs on a trash can lid or making my own pool in my backyard I always found a way to entertain myself. Supporting Detail:
I was born at Reedley Hospital on November 22, 2003. I haved lived in the same house my whole life with my mom Alicia, dad Eddie, and sister Makayla. I have another sister named Serena but she lives in Visalia. Supporting Detail:
When I was a child I wanted to be an archaeologist, because I thought that I would be able to play with the dinosaurs, but when I realized that they are all dead I decided …show more content…
Supporting Detail:
One of my biggest future goals that has stayed consistent ever since about 5th grade was wanting to be a district attorney. I want to be a district attorney because I believe the people who commit crimes should be punished for their actions. This has always been a goal of mine because I have been really interested in lawyers ever since I watched the series of “Law and Order.” Supporting Detail:
A goal I have today is to get a 4.0 or more gpa. This is important to me because both of my sisters have done something special. My sister Makayla was Miss Dinuba and that is what she is known for. So instead of being Marcus a lot of people know me as Makayla’s brother. This is something I want to change. Also my sister Serena she has done a lot in the city of Visalia. She is the president for an organization called “Autism Links.” She is also a Behavior Analyst for Visalia Unified School District. So as you can see both of my sisters have accomplished great things now it’s my turn to do something to show my individuality. Supporting