My First Mistake Essay

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When mothers tell their daughters they’re going to India, many imagine shopping among the heavily populated, colourful streets of New Delhi or Mumbai. However, my mother, being the peculiar mother she is, decided we’re going to the northeast state of Uttarakhand, which borders Nepal, to hike the treacherous Himalayas! I was somewhat shocked at first, but the idea intrigued my adventurous side; I only had one more year of highschool left, so what’s the worst that could happen? That was my first mistake… Here I am, in another country, 4000 metres above the rice fields below. Why would anyone ever agree to hike such a difficult, narrow, steep mountain? “Come on, Mom! You’re going so slow! At this rate we’ll never see that reservoir. We’ll be lucky if we even catch a glimpse of the peak,” I shouted to my mother who lagged behind me. To be completely honest, I could barely breathe, as there were …show more content…
And to remind you, I’m also nearly triple your age, so give me a break.” For my mother’s age, she looked very young thanks to her dyed brown hair and wrinkle free face, but I could barely hear her over the panting. I headed forward with too much confidence and attempted to jump up two of the jagged stone steps, each one a foot high and quite wide. In the moment, I saw two blocks of stone blocking me from my quest, obstructing my path for peace, so I tired to persevere; the altitude was so high, I lost my sense of reality and let my imagination take over. This was my second mistake.
As I tripped over the second step, I lost my balance,but I managed to catch myself with my hands. My legs were clearly too short to make the jump, which became evident through the excruciatingly painful scratches on my hands and the bruises on both my knees. I’m just glad I didn’t start bleeding 4000 metres above the ground in the middle of a dense mountain

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