Personal Narrative: Getting Lost On The Mountain

Superior Essays
Everyone at one point or another has an event happen in their lives where they learn something very important. Sometimes, what a person will learn, changes their lives forever. Many times, these life changing events are dangerous or very costly. It is events like these that people will acquire wisdom. I recently had an event like this. My experience of getting lost on a mountain at night taught me many things. Getting lost on a mountain at night with my cousins was a very significant experience for me. When this happened, my family and I were at a family reunion at the Circle J Ranch in the Bighorn Mountains. It was about 7:00 p.m. and two of my cousins and I decided that we would go on a hike together; we wanted to see if we could climb …show more content…
Sitting down, we said a quick prayer thanking God for enabling us to climb all the way up the mountain and witnessing the beauty which he has bestowed on this Earth. I glanced down at my watch and jumped in disbelief. It was already 8:45 p.m. and the sun was going down fast.
“Um, guys? The sun is almost down, we better hurry.” Dynae stated.
We made a plan to stick together as we ran down the mountain. Jumping, sliding, and running, we rushed down the steep slope of the mountain side not caring what direction we were going as long as we were going down. Many times we had to skid to a stop in order to avoid plunging down forty foot cliffs. After what seemed like a minute, we were able to find the trail we came up on. The sun’s rays kept dwindling as we ran. We almost made it all the way down the mountain side when one of my cousins claimed that she found a shortcut. Following her, we soon found out the her shortcut, in fact, was not a shortcut. We soon found ourselves lost and unable to find a safe way down. Meanwhile, our parents started freaking out. Our mothers were in tears and we could hear them wailing from where we were. With no more sunlight to guide us, cautiously walking frantically trying to get out of the heavily forested area. We then saw a flickering light and immediately ran as fast as we could toward it. As we approached the light, we discovered that it was a complete stranger with a flashlight. Behind him was my parents.
…show more content…
With this event, I should have thought of what could happen before I went up on the mountain. Doing this could have saved me from a lot of trouble. If I would have thought about the consequences of climbing all the way to the top of the mountain in the evening, without telling anyone, I would have not made the journey up the mountain. This event taught me that I need to consider the consequences before I do a potentially dangerous action. We were very lucky to make it up and back alive. Before climbing the rock walls without any form of a harness or any prior experience, I should have thought of the potential consequences. Thankfully, we were very lucky and suffered no

Related Documents

  • Improved Essays

    The Never Ending Rollercoaster As my friends and I pass by store to store we had realized that there was a bright red flyers. It had caught our eye, we went and grabbed a flyer and it had said “Ladies and Gentlemen there is going to be a new rollercoaster opening up this Saturday! Come and join the ride!” My friends had said that they wanted to go and check out the rollercoaster.…

    • 741 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    The Crevasse “Adversity is the source of our deepest growth and greatest blessings; embrace it, dare to seek It,” that was a quote from Aron Ralston, who fell down a crevasse and his arm was wedged under a rock, which inspired the movie “127 Hours.” One day I was going to the creek with my friends, Matthew and Kendal, to hang out. We had this amazing spot that had a bridge that we made and everything. We were bringing further supplies to add on to the spot and make it look more visually appealing. When we arrived at the park we brought all of the supplies down under a bridge.…

    • 624 Words
    • 3 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Moving Again Have you ever moved schools? Have you lost friends? Well it really stinks. Moving schools have affected me for lots of reasons, but I am getting better.…

    • 281 Words
    • 2 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    The Hunted I didn’t know who I was. I woke up next to a bunch of muddy kids. They all smelled like they haven't showered in weeks. There was two twins, a chubby kid, and probably the skinniest kid I’ve ever seen. Then I realized I smelled just like them.…

    • 949 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Decent Essays

    Okay, that was really weird and I don't understand anything. We were waiting to talk to you, my mother wanted to apologize for having moved away, she was not feeling well, it was too hot in the middle of all those people. We were talking about calling you into a cafe when we turned you were leaving the room with a couple. As I said understand anything.…

    • 84 Words
    • 1 Pages
    Decent Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Seeing nothing, I searched for the snake on both sides of the tall, scorched golden grass and rocks for approximately thirty seconds until I realized my brother was insane—there was nothing near us. We all decided it would be best just to forget about so we continued up the hill. When we got to the top of the mountain, there was a bench made of various sized slate grey, oval rocks; it was ancient and slowly deteriorating but surprisingly stable. It looked like the Native Americans put it together before Columbus took all their land in 1492. As I assembled myself onto the bench, I admired the opening of the trees that was roughly ten feet wide; I was seeing the world at just the right…

    • 792 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Superior Essays

    From the moment we are born we begin to learn important lessons teach us. These lessons are essential in helping to shape our character, and ultimately lead to who we become. Everybody has had that moment when someone, or even possible something, has taught you a valuable lesson that you will never forget. I know that I’ve had a multitude of them, but most of them I can’t remember the specific situation that transpired to teach me the lesson. For example, I can’t remember the first time that I touched a hot stove and realized that I probably shouldn’t do that.…

    • 1673 Words
    • 7 Pages
    Superior Essays
  • Improved Essays

    As a child growing up in Rhode Island, the smallest state in the Union, the idea of a vast planet brimming with civilization and culture was more like something out of a fairy tale than it was reality. So, when my father announced that we would be leaving the country to go to Scotland, the home of his and my ancestors, my world began to expand at a rapid pace. This trip could not have been timed more perfectly. The summer of 2007 marked the end of fourth grade, my first year at Saint Mary Academy Bay View.…

    • 863 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    My vision started to fail on mile four of the six-mile hike. Small white specks flickered across my field of vision. The next thing to go was my hearing, followed by my ability to walk in a straight line. My platoon sergeant saw the signs of heat stroke and forced me to stop. I should have stopped myself, but all I could think was: you will finish this, or you will die trying.…

    • 250 Words
    • 1 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Nt1310 Unit 3 Assignment

    • 1144 Words
    • 5 Pages

    With the sun shining, the way back felt much easier. The weather became warmer and we could clearly see our path. As I had predicted before, there was no major difficulty we faced in climbing this mountain. As soon as we reached the second base, my friend, Michael, challenged me to get back to the first base in just 1 hour. I accepted this challenge in order to prove my mountain climbing skill.…

    • 1144 Words
    • 5 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    In many circumstances, a specific event in life can have an everlasting effect on a person and alter his/her sense of direction. Maybe the most unexpected incident that one has endured changes his or her life and has an everlasting effect on how he or she chooses to live in the present time. What began as an adventurous day, ended in a freighting night. My near death experience has influenced my sense of direction by acknowledging that life is too short.…

    • 761 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    The thought of accidentally dropping my poles enters my mind as I observe lost items in the snow below. As we ascend, more of the slope enters my field of vision. At first, the skiers and snowboarders in my view move at a leisurely pace as they reach the bottom; but as altitude increases, so does the skill and speed of the people coming down. The added elevation diminishes the number of trees providing protection from the bitter wind that starts hitting us like pins and needles. I pull my bandanna up and fit my goggles to the shape of my helmet, in an attempt to block out the frigid breeze.…

    • 813 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Kayla, my best friend, took the first few steps out and said, “Come on, we will be fine!” So I moved my already shaking legs a few feet closer to the “fun”. It was beautiful up there, trees the size of giants, drop offs as deep as the lowest point in the ocean, and little us.…

    • 795 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    Pushing down on the boulder, the earth around it shudder and shakes, the stones could only be fatal. Standing up I brush the grains of sand from my knee and look up at her; in deep thought of our next move. In her eyes I could see the urge to continue, this was the only way to keep our hopes of finding our destination. There was only one other way, and that was back, back to where we had come from. We had come too far to just turn around and leave.…

    • 1313 Words
    • 6 Pages
    Improved Essays
  • Improved Essays

    A Turning Point Many events occur during a person’s lifetime, some heal the soul and others leave an unpleasant scar. Either way, by time, all of those events come together to give that person a memorable experience that will not be forgotten. I have faced many terrific circumstances, some of which gave me good memories and some gave me terrible experiences. However, the most remarkable event in my life was an exceptional one, one that made me realize that no matter how bad things get, there will always be something better.…

    • 760 Words
    • 4 Pages
    Improved Essays