This assisted me in seeing the approach that my peer took in organizing his paragraphs. Some failure in their transitions from paragraph to paragraph made me reconsider the transitions in my own paragraphs. What was more helpful was the chance to once again be able to read our completed drafts of our essays (with the introduction and conclusion completed) to another peer. As I read my own essay out loud I picked up slight errors in my writing. Reading out loud helps because I know that if I stumble on some words while reading it must signify that I can probably rephrase what I have written so that the sentence may flow more smoothly. When I proofread I begin from the start and just read the essay out loud. As I read it, I am looking for any error whether it is a grammatical error or awkward word choice. If I see a repetitive word throughout my essay, I try to switch it out for something subtler. This is so that the audience who will read my essay does not get bored of the same word used multiple times. Overall, I am satisfied with the effort that I put in while writing my essay. As much as I did struggle a bit, I learned a lot of other ways in tackling an essay. Most importantly, I enjoyed discovering new information of the topic I had
This assisted me in seeing the approach that my peer took in organizing his paragraphs. Some failure in their transitions from paragraph to paragraph made me reconsider the transitions in my own paragraphs. What was more helpful was the chance to once again be able to read our completed drafts of our essays (with the introduction and conclusion completed) to another peer. As I read my own essay out loud I picked up slight errors in my writing. Reading out loud helps because I know that if I stumble on some words while reading it must signify that I can probably rephrase what I have written so that the sentence may flow more smoothly. When I proofread I begin from the start and just read the essay out loud. As I read it, I am looking for any error whether it is a grammatical error or awkward word choice. If I see a repetitive word throughout my essay, I try to switch it out for something subtler. This is so that the audience who will read my essay does not get bored of the same word used multiple times. Overall, I am satisfied with the effort that I put in while writing my essay. As much as I did struggle a bit, I learned a lot of other ways in tackling an essay. Most importantly, I enjoyed discovering new information of the topic I had