Then I received credit for each assignment after that. I have learned so much in this course, especially how to organize my papers. I would always brainstorm before I type my papers, and I use to get exceptional grades for them in High school. It was not until I was in this course where I took my organization skills to the next level. I was writing the ‘My English’ Essay, and It was a satisfactory paper, I could see myself receiving a low A, or a high B on the assignment. Mrs. Coleman informed me that it was an amazing paper, it’s just missing something in the introduction paragraph. My paper was on how my english varies to whom I’m speaking with at the moment. I started speaking about gumbo in the first two sentences saying that my english is like gumbo. Ms. Coleman said,”...it is a great way to start off your paragraph, but it’s too great to be only a few sentences.” So she told me to speak about gumbo for the entire introduction, then transition into how my english is like gumbo as well. It was perfect, I fell in love with Mrs. Coleman as a professor. I never had a teacher that took what I had and bring it to another
Then I received credit for each assignment after that. I have learned so much in this course, especially how to organize my papers. I would always brainstorm before I type my papers, and I use to get exceptional grades for them in High school. It was not until I was in this course where I took my organization skills to the next level. I was writing the ‘My English’ Essay, and It was a satisfactory paper, I could see myself receiving a low A, or a high B on the assignment. Mrs. Coleman informed me that it was an amazing paper, it’s just missing something in the introduction paragraph. My paper was on how my english varies to whom I’m speaking with at the moment. I started speaking about gumbo in the first two sentences saying that my english is like gumbo. Ms. Coleman said,”...it is a great way to start off your paragraph, but it’s too great to be only a few sentences.” So she told me to speak about gumbo for the entire introduction, then transition into how my english is like gumbo as well. It was perfect, I fell in love with Mrs. Coleman as a professor. I never had a teacher that took what I had and bring it to another