Mr Hayden Argument

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I find Mr Hayden's argument to be unconvincing because his argument is based on limited evidence In his argument, he only presents one evidence and one example which is not enough to prove his statement is true. For example, he uses his wife and assumes that al Facebook users are like her This isahasty generalisation made by Mr Hayden which shows that his example is not reliable, Another reason would be Mr Hayden has clearly showed biasness towards Facebook because he did not even mention any studies about the positive effects of Facebook And lastly Mr Hayden has also made an assumption Facebook has a large infuence on its users and Facebook users are pressured to log is nottrue because there is no proof that everyone is feeling the same way

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