Pass The Ball: A Narrative Fiction

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It started out to be a sad and gloomy morning in Fire Hydrant Falls. They didn’t know it yet, but something was about to change the lives of two of their young residents forever. A news announcement stated that it was supposed to rain for four days straight, but later that afternoon, the rain suddenly stopped. Everyone was filled with joy after the sun came out. The kids all ran outside for some fresh air and sunlight. Even though after twenty minutes they were bored and went back inside to watch TV. All except two children, Jimmy and Jamie, who stayed out to play.
“Jamie pass the ball!” said Jimmy.
“Heads up,” she hollered. She threw the football, and it went way over Jimmy’s head. He ran backwards as fast as his little legs could carry
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Anything that comes in can’t get out unless the chosen one finds another locked door down this hallway and unlocks it,” said the door.
Jimmy and Jamie went off in search of the other locked door. They went a long way down checking both sides of the hallway searching for the right door. Before they new it, they were back to the starting point, even though they didn’t know how, since they hadn’t turned around. There they found a door that was locked, so Jimmy quickly grabbed the key, put it in the slot, and turned the key. The door unlocked and swung open. Everyone was freed at last.
When Jimmy and Jamie walked out, without Jimmy saying a thing, Jamie knew exactly what he was thinking, and it has been that way ever since. She could read his mind, but she not anyone else 's mind. “Wait what is going on thing of something,” Jamie yells, “Hey, I am not over reacting. I can read your mind.”
Jimmy could predict what Jamie was going to be doing before she would even think about doing it. It seemed like they were searching in the hidden hallway of doors for hours, but when they came out it was if no time had passed at all. How weird is

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