Moment 4-Personal Narrative

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Moment 4 It was a cold winter day in 2010, I was at my grandmas house drinking hot coco and getting all of my snow gear on for the day ahead. I look out side and I swear it looked like the snow was dancing in the wind. Today was my favorite day of the year. It was the annual sledding competition down my grandmothers hill. As I was getting bundled up I said hi to everyone and was making small talk about how excited I was until, I saw my older brother William. Now, Will has always been the talk of the competition as how he almost one last year against my Uncle Bill. Will was super ready this year he believed he would beat everyone. I was not going to let that happen. I wanted it to be my year to shine. I shouted at Will “I am gonna win this

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