Mentally Challengeed-Personal Narrative

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I have no idea what that kid was talking about. I really think he is “mentally challenged” I think they call it. Anyway I decided to walk some more, (away from the weird kid) I wasn’t at all worried about my family. About an hour later I walked back home, the sun was setting the clouds were orange, it is a beautiful sight to see. As I walked the thought that my family was captured still haunted me. I had no idea why, but it did. I was getting to my house The door was wide open and the window was shattered. “What happened here?” I asked myself. I grabbed the axe that was on the the front lawn to arm myself. I walked in the deserted house. In the middle of the floor in the walkway was a broken bat. “Hello?” I yelled nervously. I walked thru the …show more content…
I guess that kid was right. I need the ack fast it was 7:00 I had plenty of time.If I just called the cops the mob leader would just shoot my parents in the head, I had to do this by myself I have no other choice. I still needed help from someone I don't know who though. Frank maybe? No he's not very reliable my brother is knocked out he wasn't very low either. My only option is to do this by myself. I had to bring the bat to the mob so that they can free my parents I'm not sure if that will work but it’s my only hope. I ran downstairs, grabbed to the bat and darted out the door.” what was the address again?” I ask myself. “13533 bakers way” I repeat to myself. I ran in the direction the van went. I ran for about 10 minutes until I saw a sign that said bakers way. I walk down the road the number 13533. Sure enough the van was there I walked up to the doorstep took a breath and knocked on the door ” Hey!” I yelled ” I got your bat here!” the door open
“Hey boss! the kit came with the bat!” a tall bald man black coat yelled.
“Alright” I said ” I got your back now just tell me what you want so I can have my family back. “Come on and kids you can talk with the leader” the man said gesturing me in. I walked in and saw a living room full of people who dress like the man you let me in.
“ Wow he actually came” one of the men with her to his neighbor.
“Hey, Randy, I’m surprised you came, I mean you actually came.”
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“Just let them go and we can talk, and here's your stupid bat,”
“You still think this is about the bat? you can do things very few people can,”
“Just let them go,” I trying to sound brave “Or, I'll use my powers against you! ” “So you do know about them, you wouldn't dare!” he said to me
“Try me!” I said certain of something.
“Go on boys!” he yelled instantly everything around me slowed down like I was meant to do this or something. I hit the first guy with the bat sending a fly into the wall another guy came running at me I hate him in the stomach and he fell for tripping another guy. One by one and take them all on until just me and the boss new.
“Want to go?” I said to him threateningly.
“ no, no! please take whatever you want just leave me alone” he tried to run out of the room But I smacked him in the face with the bat knocking him out.
“Mom, dad!?” I yelled ”are you in here?“
“We're up here!” my dad yelled. I ran upstairs and sure enough there were my mom and dad tied up and had bags over their heads.
“ Thank goodness you're okay!” I said as I ran to untie them.
“ Honey what did they want with you?” my mother said as she struggled toget

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