His article seemed like he had a bunch of different ideas and just wrote everything down and published it. They was no transition from one topic to the other. Paragraphs leading to the other had no relation at all. It looks as if a child through it together as a last minute project and turned it in and hoped for the best. Although organization might be harder to pick up than the other forms of persuasion, it is still a key factor in a good paper/article. An organized article shows the author put a lot of time and research into his work, and Stein was lacking in organization and the same can be said about his
His article seemed like he had a bunch of different ideas and just wrote everything down and published it. They was no transition from one topic to the other. Paragraphs leading to the other had no relation at all. It looks as if a child through it together as a last minute project and turned it in and hoped for the best. Although organization might be harder to pick up than the other forms of persuasion, it is still a key factor in a good paper/article. An organized article shows the author put a lot of time and research into his work, and Stein was lacking in organization and the same can be said about his