Martial God Asura Analysis

Martial God Asura had the potential to be an amazing novel but unfortunately Shan Liang de Mi Feng messed it up. Writing is very delicate and it is common for people to make mistakes when writing xianxia/wuxia novels. I hope to improve the writing of others in the genre by pointing out common mistakes. First, I should explain the genre. The genre xianxia/wuxia are primarily from Japanese and Chinese countries. The genres are based around cultivation. Cultivation is when people absorbs Qi from the air to make their body stronger. They tend to acquire magical powers. Also, the world of cultivation is very cutthroat and centered around killing.

Next I should point out common mistakes. The most common problem is that the protagonist tends to be too strong and there is no real struggle. For example, the protagonist starts cultivating for a short period of time and defeats people who are far far stronger with ease That creates a plain and boring story. For example, in the novel, Beast Piercing The …show more content…
Is there any fun in reading a novel like that? Another complaint is that people tend to do what they like even though it is suicidal which causes me to give up on on reading the novel. For example, Martial God Asura is a great novel, but the main character makes suicidal moves like invading a city to save his friend from a forced marriage when he could have used a status symbol he stole earlier to intimidate the fiancé’s family into cancelling the marriage. Not only is it safer to use the status symbol, but considering the fact that, in the novel, around that time his family died so he could have used the status symbol to protect them. I also dislike it when the main character is so powerful because in his past life he was super strong and so he knows every technique. An example is Emperor’s Domination, the main character knows everything so even if the most powerful people gang up on him it only helps him in some way. It would be one thing, if it was from