Margot: A Narrative Fiction

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“Margot, you’re so annoying! You’re like a fussy baby!” Max bickered. “Why do you always talk about the sun? Nobody likes you!” I turned at Max. I looked at him sincerely.
“The sun is coming out today.. I know it---”
“NO!” Max yelled furiously. “It’s never coming out! What don’t you understand, you little…. Hey everyone, let’s lock her in the closet!“ All of my classmates began swarming around me, like angry yellow jackets.
“No, please, no!” I screamed loudly at them. Instead of putting me down, they snickered at me and gave me a shove. I tumbled right into the closet door. I fought back as hard as I could, hitting their chests, but they laughed at me and Rachel came up to me and punched me hard in the stomach. “Ugh!” I squealed in pain.
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“Please! Please!” I howled. “Please… Please….” I kept pleading for over five minutes until Max kicked the closet door.
“Shut up, Margot. If you don’t stop, I’m going to come in there and I’m going to break all of your limbs. Ya hear me? Now quit it!” I obeyed Max’s orders and decided to curled up into a ball and rocked back and forth on my legs.
“Class” Mrs. Smith interrupted. “is everyone here?” She seemed to have excitement in her voice. I wonder what it could be. Then I realized, it was the sun. I needed to get out, quickly! If I said anything, Max would beat me up!
“Yes Mrs. Smith, we’re all here!” Max replied. Oh no! I don’t have much time now. What do I do? If I just stand here, I will miss the most spectacular thing on this stupid planet! As my thoughts swirled around in my head, I could hear the the clop clop of shoes, indicating my classmates were departing the classroom. It came to me: I had threw it all away, my only chance,
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I didn’t do anything, because I was in a deep shock. I could already feel my throat get tight and choky and my stomach drop as if I were on a rollercoaster. My heart had shattered into pieces. The only thing I had hope for, in this moronic atmosphere, was to see the dazzling fireball in the air. Then, I had the most insane plan; calling the police. I located the emergency phone on the right wall of the closet and called 911.
“Hello, 911, what is your emergency?” asked the

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