Short Story: Truled Midus

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I'm going to tell you how all of this madness happened. It was the year 2017,a dark and gloomy morning in a small town known as “Talls”. There was this one girl named Millie, she had a dad named Jhonn, her mom had died to a disease called “Truled Midus” it was a horrible disease that ran in her family's blood. Millie was 91% supposed to have had it when she was born, but she never did. She was now 12 years old, she has been to the doctors office many times before, and they have told her that it didn’t look like she would get it but there was a slight chance she would get it when she got older.The horrible thing was that it was contagious.
There was one guy who knew a cure for my mom's disease, but he would not tell anyone what it was. He said that there was limited supply , but we weren’t sure he was telling the truth. We thought it was just because he was a cruel old man who didn't care for anybody but himself, his name was Martin. People said he used to shoot at kids who went on his property with a shotgun. No one in our town liked him especially me. If you want to know why he didn't give the medicine to my mom was because he used most of it on him. We all just went on with are life’s till one day i woke up and didn't feel so good,
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I walked into the kitchen and saw my dad sitting there. He asked me if i was okay because he said i looked pale. Then i fell to the hard cold floor. I woke up in the hospital my dad was sitting in a chair at the corner of my eye. He asked me “Hey sweetie, how you feeling?” “Okay.” i replied. I asked him what had happened and he said that i got the disease my mother had gotten with tears filling his eyes. “ How can this be?” I asked him, “I felt fine the night before.” I said. He replied and said “The doctors said there was a possibility this would happen, i'm going to go to Martin and make him give me the recipe, because i can't lose you

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