Luna Miller: A Fictional Narrative

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I flinched as someone put their hand on my shoulder drawing me out of my thoughts. I turned around slowly. I saw Luke with a worried face.

"Please don't cry... or else your make me cry.." He said while tearing up. Huh? I put my hand to my face and felt liquid. He went in front of me and cupped my face with his hands and wiped my tears. I blushed and looked down. What has this boy done to me? I am supposed to be emotionless.

"I'm not crying.. My eyes are just sweating.." I said with a forced laugh. He looked at me with a sad smile. I got up and ran away from him. Why am I even running? Maybe its because I just don't wanna face him right now...

I stopped running and I ended up in a cliff. The way the water hits the rocks makes me think of when my mom used to sing to me..

I sobbed and sang the song. I heard a twig snapped behind me. I looked back and saw a blond hair girl with blue highlights that looks slightly older than me
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She smiled.

"You're welcome." She said. She then sat by me.

"I'm Mia Smith by the way." She said holding out her hand.

I shook it and said "Luna Miller." Her eyes widened.

"Luna Miller!?" She exclaimed. She took out her phone and called someone. She gave it to me. I looked at her confused.

"Oh yeah.. Sorry.. One of my friends that if I find a girl named Luna Miller I have to call them." She explained. I nodded.

"Hello." I said quietly to the phone.

"Hi is this Luna Miller." Someone said over the phone. I couldn't tell whether it was a boy or a girl, but they sound so familiar.

"It's Zack." The person named Zack said.

"Umm.. I'm so sorry, but I think you got the wrong person cause I don't know anyone with that name." I said to him. I heard him sigh and said something under his breath. I think I've heard of that name before. I think the woman who said she was my 'real mom' told me that that guy named Zack is my brother.. I don't know... If she was my 'real mom' then why didn't my mom tell

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