Personal Narrative: Love Through His Eyes

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Love through his eyes

Her past,My future

You would go down the hall with a smile as bright as the sun. The sway in your walk, the smooth sound of your voice, the green in your eyes, the way your hair bounced, and the way you were, all of these things made me fall in love with you and that’s how it would always be until he walked into your life and destroyed my world.

It was the winter of 2009 and today was the coldest day of January or at least that’s what it felt like. I was walking down the road on my way to Jacob 's house to play the new xerf man 4000 and I couldn 't wait. As I was walking I saw a bridge and on that bridge was a small figure standing on the edge looking down at the river so I moved closer and squinted my eyes. It was a girl with long, curly, red, hair blowing in the wind and she was crying. She kept moving closer to the edge scaring me. I didn 't know what to do! Run to the police? yell for help? walk away? All of these things ran through my head at the speed of light and then I looked up and saw her face. She was looking up at the gray sky snowflakes falling on her face and tears rolling down her cheeks from her eyes. To the world she just looked like another girl but to me she looked like a ray of light shining through the dark, gray sky. I slowly walked to the bridge and called out to her
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Her eyes were red and swollen from the tears she had been crying, but her eyes! Oh her eyes they were like emeralds lost in the ocean and I found

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