Lookism In The Classroom

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Heading to college, this student remembers walking slowly down high school hallways to English class. The overwhelming assignments quickly covered my desk and questions filled my head. As my hand rockets towards the ceiling, I realize that this semester might be slightly tricky. Grammar, punctuation, plagiarism… What are all these words I hear? College classes generate the knowledge you will display throughout the profession you have chosen. Starting any class, it is uncertain to know what experience you might receive; especially, when choosing to learn through an online class. Consider incorporating past experiences when registering. It is only faith between teacher and student to fully receive the ultimate education. The purpose that one should pursue from any English class is the ability to …show more content…
The definition essay startled me as the directions were slightly sigh. Patience and self-confidence was major requirement for myself as this question kept puzzling through my brain, how am going to write that many words on the word “lookism”? To better define this topic, I simply defined “lookism” in the Webster dictionary. Research was needed to even determine how I would start this assignment, so I gathered information on discrimination in today’s society. To organize my thoughts on this specific paper, I chose to do a topic outline. The paper started with a clever opening paragraph and continued with strong supporting facts. At this point, I realized that my paragraph format had excelled tremendously. Per the syllabus, the research paper was my next assignment. The skill I chose improve during this essay was researching valid sources. As a writer, my finished product met above and beyond my personal expectations. Dr. Freeman’s comments were not added to this paper sadly due to paper rater difficulty; however, I believe she would have had uplifting remarks due to my grade being highly

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