Lola Didn T Cry: A Narrative Fiction

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Lola had no idea what to say anymore. No matter what she said to Fallen he seemed to just fight it at every turn. She knew this was wrong, that he deserved better than her. Having sex was just supposed to be a gift, a thank you for everything he had been doing for her. It was all she had after all, her body and magic. There was nothing to her beyond that, not even the memories that would make her a real person.

She wanted to cry at his kind words, tears building up even as her body burned for him. She bucked beneath him as the sharp pain of his teeth dug into her neck. The animal within her wanted to return the favor, to leave the same mark and claim what was hers. But Lola fought it, this had to be more than instinct, he deserved more than that. He wanted more than that, he wanted love.
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She wanted to hold onto that safe and protected feeling, that idea of belonging or feeling as if she had a place. One stupid idea and she would be losing it all. Lola didn't want that, she didn't want to lose this...him. Even if she ended up as nothing more than a stupid fox to him. There had to be a way to make it right, she just needed to find it. So for now Lola closed her eyes and fought back tears and the pain that came from her chaotic emotions. She closed off part of herself and gave over to the pleasure that the slow thrust was beginning to push through her body. Her hands slipped up his body and pulled Fallen close, her lips parting as she kissed him. It was wrong to steal another moment from him, but Lola couldn't stop herself from doing just

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