Lochie Creative Writing

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The sun, the sand and surf.
Not a concern Lochie had to worry about since the school holidays started. Lochie was suddenly woken up by the stench of urine.
“PHILLIP!”. Lochie screamed. Phillip woke up startled.
“Oh no, not again”. Phillip said with a whiny tone to his voice.
“Get changed please,” Lochie said with a tired voice. Phillip got up with a frown, slowly got some clothes and went into the bathroom with pee dripping down his wet PJ’s onto the polished wooden floor. Lochie sighed and then gradually went over to Phillips bed to see so much urine it looked the yellow sea. Fortunately mum put a plastic sheet over his bed. Lochie thought to himself.

After a few minutes, Lochie heard the bathroom door open slightly. Phillip shouted,
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“Wow, I forgot how enormous this place is,” Lochie said. Lochie and his family walked slowly through the shopping mall because people were pushing through them like a blizzard. Lochie saw a present store.
“No! The present what am I going to get him!” Lochie said while panicking. He jumped a few times to see above the crowd. To see where the store was and he ran to it pushing people in the process.
“Ten dollars is the lowest price here?” Lochie said unimpressed.As Lochie walked out of the store staring at his four dollars and thinking about an excuse for not getting Phillips present, he turned around because there was a loud noise and there was a robbery at the shop and four people armed with knives ran out with bags full of money! Everyone around
Lochie ran away from the robbers and almost pushed him over. Lochie stared as they ran out of the mall and Lochie looked and the shop owner and he looked like he saw a ghost. Lochie walked closer to the store and saw a small toy on

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