I added personal information, that I myself am in college, to show an connection between the topic and myself. My response also included an emotional connection by expressing my goals and purpose for attending college. I elaborated that college could give me experiences that would impact and change the direction of the course I was going. I also included an example of what a person’s future could hold if they didn’t attend college. This example, living a life in prison, provided an emotional impact on the
I added personal information, that I myself am in college, to show an connection between the topic and myself. My response also included an emotional connection by expressing my goals and purpose for attending college. I elaborated that college could give me experiences that would impact and change the direction of the course I was going. I also included an example of what a person’s future could hold if they didn’t attend college. This example, living a life in prison, provided an emotional impact on the