In my paper, I tried avoiding just explaining what the Korean Armistice Agreement was because I felt like that was too easy as well required very little thought. I focused on the problems of the Korean Armistice Agreement because I have family that lives in South Korea as well I find the Korean Armistice Agreement to be very problematic for multiple reasons. I divided the essay by having each paragraph focus on a specific problem or two problems that connected with each other. The problems that I used were issues that affected my family in South Korea and myself. For example in the first paragraph, I focused on the constant threat of war because every day I worry about my family in Korea. The second paragraph focuses on families being divided
