Citing her experience made her more credible because she was writing what was happening around her. Additionally, her including her peers showed that she wanted insight in not only herself but others as well. That first-hand experience helps the reader visualize what she went through and the insight of what she was thinking. Towards the middle of her writing, you sense the pathos appeal, with her experience personally, and relatable thought and emotions. She points out that she would wear a fur but not want to kill one, “I want to wear fur, but I don’t want to kill animals for it, least of all the appealing, doggish wolf” (Simpson-Dean, Sherry). This shows that she is hint of a hypocrite because she likes to wear fur but she would not kill an animal. She continues with opinions of what others think of wolf trapping:
“All the things you hear are probably true, good and bad. I love wolves. It would be a sad day if there were not wolves in this country. I’d rather have too many than not enough, to tell you the truth. I want there always to be wolves. Always,