First Date: A Narrative Fiction

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Kelsey and Angela walked in silence towards the parking lot. Kelsey could tell that she was nervous, and didn’t want to push her to talk. Upon seeing Derek and Ben in the parking lot, she reached over and squeezed Angela’s hand.
“You’ll do great.” She whispered before leading her over to where the two boys were waiting.
“Hello gorgeous.” Ben called to her, jogging over to the two of them and pulling Kelsey in for a kiss. “We could have walked up to grab you.”
“Oh no that’s okay,” Kelsey replied kissing him on the cheek.
Derek had followed Ben over to where the two girls were standing at a much slower pace. He now stood awkwardly behind Ben, not sure what to do.
“Hey Derek, how are you?” Kelsey asked, walking over to give him a hug.
“Not
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“First off, let’s get one thing straight here. I am not your girl, this is our first date and I don’t know if you’ve noticed, but it hasn’t been going very well. Second of all there is no need to attack the poor guy, he said he was sorry and that it was an accident.” Derek stared at her for a moment before turning around. “Whatever, I’m going outside to make a call.” He told her before walking out of the restaurant. Angela shook her head, she didn’t know what Ben had been thinking when he had given this guy a glowing review. Turning back to the boy that had spilled his drink on her she saw that he was still slightly cowering as if expecting Derek to come rushing back in any second and punch him. “He’s a jerk.” Was all she said to him before turning back to sit on the bar stool, she figured that since her date ditched her she might as well drink until Kelsey and Ben got here. “Why are you dating him then?” He asked, still standing next to …show more content…
The scene faded from Angela’s mind as a new one took place. She was blindfolded, being led into a room, she was laughing. “Ethan! What is happening? Why can’t I see where you’re taking me?” She asked, still laughing as she felt Ethan’s hand leave hers and she blindly felt about. “No, no no! Don’t move yet!” he exclaimed as she heard the clatter of something. “Crap.” He muttered under his breath and she laughed again. “Okay, okay. You can take it off now.” He told her. Reaching up and removing the blindfold she gasped at what Ethan had done. They were supposed to have a picnic outside but the storm had ruined their plans and had even cut off the power. In Ethan’s kitchen he had moved the table to the side and laid across the entire floor were blankets. A small bouquet of roses was in the center of the blanket next to a picnic basket. Candles were everywhere to help them see. “Ethan-“ Angela started as she looked around the room. “Okay, I know its not much, but I didn’t have a lot of time. Next time I promise, I promise I’ll make it better.” He told her as he pulled her down to sit next to

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