Karmen Alternate Ending

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By the looks of it, Karmen had been right about one thing, though perhaps it had been quite an obvious statement. After all, why in the world would he have even the slightest interest in someone like Daisy, when she was right under his nose? Yes, now that she thought about it, that one thought was ridiculous in every way possible. Not only was the blondie uptight and pretty much a bore, but she was also plain in terms of looks. On the other hand, she couldn't say the same about Kurt. The man was indeed just as gullible as his wife and she could bet on anything that he was more innocent than she'd ever be, but he was rather eye-catchy -she wasn't sure at this point if it was because of the uniform too, thanks to someone who had to specifically point it out- and she had to admit that him being married added to the thrill.

Even so, it wasn't good enough of a deal to risk having to kiss bye
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But it does sound tricky to do this without being caught. We might be seen while trying to find a place to hide the car, and what if they do find it in spite of having hidden it?" Details like these were always on her mind when she approached a task, and while she didn't mean to make this seem like a plan doomed to failure, she felt like there had to be something even better than that. However, all that slipped from her mind when she caught him gazing at her, focusing on the cleavage accentuated by her dress, just to hear in the end that he intended to buy her shoes with flat soles of all the things. "Why? Do you intend to have us stuck in the middle of nowhere again?" she inquired with an obvious scowl, not too excited at the prospect of having to wear something else than heels. After all, they were like her fashion signature; and honestly, who could separate a woman from her favorite shoes? "We're going to reach Vegas without any of that, do you hear me? Besides, you owe me some dresses in case you've forgotten." she added as a matter of

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