John Brake: A Narrative Fiction

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t was a cold winter night in Pennsylvania, and there was a little girl about 9 years old and her older brother. Her older brother is about 11 years old and they have found a boot in the woods one night while they were playing tag, the little sister went running from her older brother and reached the woods. So her brother went after her and then the little sister Annie had tripped over the shoe and fell and then the older brother Jake picked it up and brought it home. He showed his mom and she told him that if he does not go put it back right that second, that the whole family could be in serious trouble.

The next morning they had to go school but on their way to school, they went to the woods to put the boot back. The kids went in the front
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When the got in the building it was pitch black. They were not able to see anything so Jake pulled his phone out and turned the flashlight on. The flashlight turned on and they saw a room full of people with cloaks on. Annie and Jake started to run but when they turned around to run they ran into two people that grabbed them by the arms and brought them back into the middle of the …show more content…
Jakes’ phone started ringing. The leader told him not to answer it.

Jake responded, “But she will be worried if i don’t answer.”

“She was already worried that you were going to get in trouble.” said the leader, “Do not answer it.”

Jake answered the phone and both kids ran. The lights turned on so the kids looked back to see how many people were chasing after them. When they looked back they saw that there was an army of people in cloaks chasing them. At this point they thought that they would never make it out but they reached the end of the forest the men stopped chasing them and ran back to the big building. After they stopped running after them Annie noticed that they stopped because of the sun. She told Jake, “I think they stopped because they do not light brightness.”

“Maybe that’s why they had the building so dark?” Jake responded, “Anyway, we need to get back home before something else happens to us.”

So they were on their way home and they saw the boot laying in the grass.

Jake asked, “Should we pick it up?”

Annie responded, “I’m kind of afraid

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