Jennifer's Room: A Narrative Fiction

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(Michelle Reads) It was a normal quiet day in the mundane town of Sioux Falls South Dakota. The streets were empty and the lights were turned out. But all of a sudden you could hear a loud cry coming from the Gonzalez’s house.
“What was that noise?” asked Sierra.”
“It sounds like Jennifer” implied Diego.” ( Noah)
( Michelle Reads) Jennifer was upstairs by herself so the family all rushed up the stairs to see what was wrong. When the family got upstairs, they saw that Jennifer was gone and her window was open. The family searched her room and then all the sudden Diego found a note what was on the note shocked them all, as Diego read out loud, his voice quivering (Noah)“ ”You have 48 hours to find me or else” I'm closer than you think
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( Riley) Diego thought about it for a while and whe he got home, he told his mom everything and showed her the note and then a light bulb must have clicked in their heads because in unison “ Jennifer’s room” and they rush up the stairs. Trying to find a clue in the mess that was Jennifer’s room was hard, but then all of a sudden Diego found a stick
(Michelle) “ Why is there a stick in Jennifer’s room” asked Sierra
(Noah) “I don’t know but I’m going to find out” assured Diego.
The next morning Diego went over to Steven’s house to talk about all the information he gathered and see if he has more. As Diego approached Steven’s front door he saw a note on the door step.
“Another note from the kidnapper”
The note read “Times up who was the first to go?”
“You can find her under a tall tree as tall as a building”
“ I’m closer than you think”
( Michelle) Diego ran as fast as he could to Steven’s front door to tell him he knew where one of the girls layed.
( Noah) “He killed one, he killed one of the girls he kidnapped” Diego Yelped
( Noah) “Under the tall tree in our sister’s favorite park.” Diego declared
( Riley) “Okay lets go” implied

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