Jemma's Exemplary Essay

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Jemma is an exemplary student. She puts a lot of thought into her work, and her results so far are commendable. Her essay writing skills are improving, in particular she shows a talent for well thought-out and comprehensive ideas. Jemma has more than enough potential to achieve Excellence when she moves on to NCEA. The next step for her is to attempt to connect her wider knowledge of other texts within her analysis, and develop her own personal insight and moral observations. Jemma is on track to achieve great results this year. It’s been a pleasure having her in class.
Rhian
Rhian is a delightful and studious student. She completes all her homework tasks on time, and is able to manage herself in class to complete written tasks and group work.

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