Jeffrey worked on his essay all last night, we looked over it and had him make some changes. Besides some lingering punctuation errors, in my opinion, it is not what I would expect at a seventh grade level. However, I am truly not sure what to expect at this level. I feel his paragraph structure and content need work. I had him send it to you so you could review and offer feedback. I hate to see him fail, and since we are not sure at this point, if he will be able to revise it after your comments, do you assign extra
