James 's Speech : Speech Essay

752 Words Oct 13th, 2015 4 Pages
James Lenze’s speech was good; he seemed to adhere to most of the instructions. His verbal stance wasn’t all that great, he sounded a little like a robot for most of the speech. He could really improve on his non-verbal stance too, because he doesn’t really seem to engage with the audience or move around much. He seemed to be organized at least with the speech though; he has just a little struggle reciting everything back to his audience. The speech seemed to be a longer speech and felt like it was becoming a little boring at times. He sited his work and had power point as well to show his audience. It wasn’t a bad speech for a first time. I would rate him a 7 out of 10 and give him a B. Tiffany Britt’s speech wasn’t all that great. The person filming should have picked a new spot and the length was way over the recommended 5 minutes. Her verbal stance was all over the place with no volume or tone; she seemed to have a lot of trouble remembering what she was suppose to say and continued to mumble. Her non- verbal was just as bad, she never made eye contact with the audience and read from note cards the whole time. She still struggled with the speech even with the note cards and it all seemed to unorganized. There weren’t any oral citations and she just didn’t seem to follow many of the recommended instructions for the speech. I would have to give her a 3 out of 10 and a D on the speech. Abigail Williams’s speech wasn’t bad, but it could use some improvement. She did…

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