James Lenze Speech Analysis

James Lenze’s speech was good; he seemed to adhere to most of the instructions. His verbal stance wasn’t all that great, he sounded a little like a robot for most of the speech. He could really improve on his non-verbal stance too, because he doesn’t really seem to engage with the audience or move around much. He seemed to be organized at least with the speech though; he has just a little struggle reciting everything back to his audience. The speech seemed to be a longer speech and felt like it was becoming a little boring at times. He sited his work and had power point as well to show his audience. It wasn’t a bad speech for a first time. I would rate him a 7 out of 10 and give him a B. Tiffany Britt’s speech wasn’t all that great. The person filming should have picked a new spot and the length was way over the recommended 5 minutes. Her verbal stance was all over the place with no volume or tone; she seemed to have a lot of trouble remembering what she was suppose to say and …show more content…
My verbal stance throughout the speech was good for the most part with a warm friendly tone towards my audience. My non- verbal stance could have been improved a little. I was holding that paper with the speech on it and I wish I had put it down, because I played with it the whole time. Next time I want to engage with my audience a little more too. The speech was informative though and energetic with enough volume for everyone to hear. The organization of the speech was put together well enough for the audience to follow along with me. I mentioned my oral citations at the end when stating that I had researched the game on Wikipedia and other websites. Next time I will have a podium and stage seating though. I feel its much easier than trying to gather a group of people in a living room and present something too them. I would rate myself an 8 out 10 and give myself an