Jailine’s Writing Grade
In regards to Eric Viets writing class. I. Jailine Estrella, absolutely, without a doubt, positively deserve an A or better yet a A+.
Like many of my classmates, we want to receive the best possible score on the work we have presented in class. However the reason I deserve an A in this class is because, I as a writer and student have shown growth and strength as a writer, professionalism, and overall achievement in the class. With my writing pieces I have shown in how I have moved into college readiness writing. And we all know, college=success=MONEY.
When looking at my CBM scores much growth is shown. Starting off in the hundreds zone, I have made sure to increase my writing fluency by increasing to the two …show more content…
I made sure to explore divergent and interesting genres to revolve my pieces about. My pieces not only show growth as a writer but my experience through my first semester as a highschool senior. Starting off with a fun at easy genre of a recipe, It reflected on me entering the new year, semi laid back. I moved up to creating websites, this piece reflected on me transitioning to becoming more serious in my work. Although this piece being a satirical and silly piece, I wanted to take a platform in where I spent most of my time finding help and research for my school work looking at hundreds of boring websites and turn it into my own fun piece. Now taking a step further in applying to colleges and universities,with all the stress that came with that process, I wanted to create my own college in where it contained everything I wanted to see in a school. With this piece I learned more about looking at multiple mentor texts and trying to match the genre as much as I could. Making multiple writing drafts of this, and having the most feedback, this piece really pushed me as a writer. Finally, the essay. This piece although contradicting my previous statement of not wanting to do generic pieces, this piece help me prove to myself that I was capable of writing college ready essays. This piece being apart of two classes, my AP English and writing, this was my longest piece, showing growth in word count, but also being able to properly form opinions and back them up with evidence. Having two classes to work on this, really allowed me to dive deep with this piece and receive a lot of feedback and
In regards to Eric Viets writing class. I. Jailine Estrella, absolutely, without a doubt, positively deserve an A or better yet a A+.
Like many of my classmates, we want to receive the best possible score on the work we have presented in class. However the reason I deserve an A in this class is because, I as a writer and student have shown growth and strength as a writer, professionalism, and overall achievement in the class. With my writing pieces I have shown in how I have moved into college readiness writing. And we all know, college=success=MONEY.
When looking at my CBM scores much growth is shown. Starting off in the hundreds zone, I have made sure to increase my writing fluency by increasing to the two …show more content…
I made sure to explore divergent and interesting genres to revolve my pieces about. My pieces not only show growth as a writer but my experience through my first semester as a highschool senior. Starting off with a fun at easy genre of a recipe, It reflected on me entering the new year, semi laid back. I moved up to creating websites, this piece reflected on me transitioning to becoming more serious in my work. Although this piece being a satirical and silly piece, I wanted to take a platform in where I spent most of my time finding help and research for my school work looking at hundreds of boring websites and turn it into my own fun piece. Now taking a step further in applying to colleges and universities,with all the stress that came with that process, I wanted to create my own college in where it contained everything I wanted to see in a school. With this piece I learned more about looking at multiple mentor texts and trying to match the genre as much as I could. Making multiple writing drafts of this, and having the most feedback, this piece really pushed me as a writer. Finally, the essay. This piece although contradicting my previous statement of not wanting to do generic pieces, this piece help me prove to myself that I was capable of writing college ready essays. This piece being apart of two classes, my AP English and writing, this was my longest piece, showing growth in word count, but also being able to properly form opinions and back them up with evidence. Having two classes to work on this, really allowed me to dive deep with this piece and receive a lot of feedback and