Jack's Alternate Ending

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One sunny day, there lived a little boy called Jack. He was a quite smart person and he didn’t like to play. He loved studying by himself because when he was little, his parents died, so he was taken into care by his grandparents and he was so lonely.
One day, when he was on his way home, there suddenly came a strong wind that blew him away. Then he went to a forest, where he saw many animals. Suddenly, a wolf came out and said, “Human, nice to meet you. Let me show you around.” It seemed as if they were friends because on the way, they were talking and playing; also, the wolf was very kind and friendly. Then the wolf brought him to his home. He gave him some food and a place to rest. While they were having dinner, he said, “I am sorry because
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Suddenly, there was a giant sea monster that grabbed Jack up and tried to hurt him. The wolf saved Jack and ran with him back into the forest. The wolf took care of Jack very well, so he recovered very well.
When they were discussing about the giant sea monster, suddenly, the house shook and everything fell down. They ran outside to see what was happening. It was the giant sea monster walking out of the water and trying to come towards them.
Jack sat on the wolf’s back and they ran far away from the giant sea monster.
Finally, they settled down in a cave. Suddenly, Jack felt at home, because it would be safe and warm. The wolf gave him some fruit to eat and tried to comfort him. Then they started thinking about how to get Jack home and get past the giant sea monster. Jack said, “If I jump into the swirl while the giant sea monster is coming up, then I can go back home!” It was so dangerous to do because if Jack couldn’t make it in time, he may fall into the sea.
The next day, they headed to the sea. The giant sea monster saw Jack and it tried to get Jack. Then the wolf protected Jack. Finally, Jack went into the swirl and said goodbye to the wolf. He headed back home with both happiness and

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