However, when he writes on his own, his writing lacks meaning, correct use of grammar, organization and a good sequential order. As shown in his writing assessment, he is unable to write more than one paragraph and struggles to write one paragraph independently due to his struggles to come up with ideas and construct complete sentences. He needs to work on grammar, detail, organization, transitions and elaboration in his writings. For example, the writing assessment asked Isaac to write about someone or something that he was thankful for. He was first given a graphic organizer to complete and then needed to transfer it into paragraphs. Upon starting the graphic organizer, he initially was unable to provide an idea of something or someone he was thankful for. After providing him with choices of people or things that he could be thankful for, he was able to choose his dad. He was then asked why he was thankful for his dad and was unable to provide a response. He was then given a list of examples for why someone might be thankful for their parent’s. He eventually came up with the ideas; makes me food, he plays with me and he takes me places. Isaac was then asked to elaborate on each reason he listed to provide more detail. He was unable to come up with any ideas for “makes me food” and “he takes me places.” With prompting he was able to
However, when he writes on his own, his writing lacks meaning, correct use of grammar, organization and a good sequential order. As shown in his writing assessment, he is unable to write more than one paragraph and struggles to write one paragraph independently due to his struggles to come up with ideas and construct complete sentences. He needs to work on grammar, detail, organization, transitions and elaboration in his writings. For example, the writing assessment asked Isaac to write about someone or something that he was thankful for. He was first given a graphic organizer to complete and then needed to transfer it into paragraphs. Upon starting the graphic organizer, he initially was unable to provide an idea of something or someone he was thankful for. After providing him with choices of people or things that he could be thankful for, he was able to choose his dad. He was then asked why he was thankful for his dad and was unable to provide a response. He was then given a list of examples for why someone might be thankful for their parent’s. He eventually came up with the ideas; makes me food, he plays with me and he takes me places. Isaac was then asked to elaborate on each reason he listed to provide more detail. He was unable to come up with any ideas for “makes me food” and “he takes me places.” With prompting he was able to