"For this, an ideal government.."
"..the inter relation.." it should be interrelation
"Quiet often Military come in play quite often when a relation.."
"And a military interference is.." How if you replace the word "And" with other transition signals to make your essay more academic, for example: "furthermore, moreover, in addition.
"For example, when.." I read that you use "for example" quite often. You can use another transitional phrases which are similar to the phrases. Also, please put a comma after